That's excellent work Adrian. Congratulations to Alice for a job well done, and staying the course (and small pat on your back for, what I am sure, is only a little assistance
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As to any "mistakes", I can't se any except for the possible use of the underwing bombs instead of the drop-tanks, or that the exhausts are slightly darker than usual camo pattern.
And you'd be amazed, Adrian, how pale and "bright" the undersurface was in real.